This one's a series, do you think it's cool?
The first one was http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Al4PVT_.wLOy3fYOmF3shc3ty6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080407040816AAM8Tym This one's part two. I Fade Far So As Roses Fade Do despairing souls feature retribution from depressing together by durations set before night? Do you lie to sleep? From tire? No. Wrong. You awake in dark. Desire free of all restrictions, determined delicious dissent in infectious dream. Flight, emptiness, an eternity, end me in ever, far rosy fade. Aggregate stars, more far fed gestating souls in frustration, vegetation degenerating from creation sliding in less formed night, we, us, our, grace. Grails fated like aspirations in a mesa filling at repression gallows, gods fiddles, hers, just slaughter, us. Cigarette packs fade in degrees, far so as roses do. Railroad logic gears slave latent incline degree cluster dead engagements especially dire escapes, like handing festive decorations beset as ingredients for a season lighted in jest so severe so is lead to a life that is little in sad and beat in dead. Thousands of thousands feast, flower, do you fast? Lie, feed me, poison, do so, go, fade far so. The intent so that you fake retribution was for escape, the depth of your soul, the sin you revenged upon magical in your end, the rose you rested on my grave, that you referred in your woven thought the wet return of your clatter gale, a demon destiny, delta. Soul that storms, beast in there, enigmatic inject, stab there, me, there where you fade far so as roses fade.
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Hmmmm...I think this is yummy. The third stanza is a cloud, shifting with every waive of the hand. Very nice. TD
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I think it's creative.
Title : This one's a series, do you think it's cool
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